Once I saw in China a cool clear mountaintop
With air as clear as saintly tears, as pure as virgin blush.

Once in China
Once I saw in China a cool clear mountaintop
With air as clear as saintly tears, as pure as virgin blush
Where mornings brisk, day’s warming kiss, leads evenings hasty dusk
While nighttime skies, a million eyes, weave tales and stories aloft
There were fish in the waters of clear crystal blue
Pine on the hills, scented saps, dripping dew
The mosses were wet, deep green and obese
Fingers pushing down, clear rivers springing out
Yes, such a place I spied that day when reaching furthest peak
When through the veil of lifting haze the forests gave their way
For there beyond those tall twin tops, lay verdant, firm and fixed
The land of Eve, where she conceived and all our futures lost
Yet still a place of beauties peace and innocence of breast
A place with naught but happiness, for wanderers and the lost
Where misty fogs of honeydew, with clouds of sweet, spiced tea
Does lace the breeze in future scents, of travelers on the wing
Oh my God of such a place such men have yearned and fought
Heroes, kings, knights and fools, all died to pay the cost
To have and hold but one sparse piece of heavens restful lot
Yet I of all then stood and saw what Eden once was like
The air that day was neither cool, nor heat was ever hot
Nor was the food err not enough nor sweets but never not
Then it was I fell in love, on shadowed mountainside
By brook and glen, at rivers edge, swift waters falling spent
Hearts do tumble slower, when rushing down a hill
As lives loom a bit larger, when forced against their will
Yet we both lie coiled in exhaustion at the end of each new day
The old end fatigued, the new one… tired from all it’s play
There on my knees, waters falling all round
I held out my hand, took hers in my palm
Yes was her answer, still is to this day
Oh China my China, still so far away
An old man embraced me, in shadow and shade
His wife she just smiled, mumbled and waived
Some sat beside me, to see if for real
A white man from Meagu could so love a hill
I saw once in China, a cool mountaintop
A place I was happy, my wandering stopped
(C)2011 Tim Wilkinson & Wayne Wilks
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