The beauty and necessity of revolution.

A black sky at high noon;
The tombstone marking the grave
of a living Earth that shows no signs of life;
Paralyzing, life-draining stillness
No wind to sway the willow’s rigid limbs;
Dense mists hanging motionless, obscure
A fog clouding all vision of hope;
No one who sees, hears, or speaks.
Then a shift in the air
A light breeze beginning to blow,
becoming an angry, violent wind:
The sweet gale of revolution.
Oaks whipping, whirling, uprooted;
Torrents of resistance lashing stagnance from the land;
Bolts of lightning illuminating the blackness,
allowing all to see glimpses of truth who will;
Thunder rolls heralding the break of the storm,
A wonderful symphony of broken silence!
Screaming wind, roaring thunder, pounding rain, piercing lightning;
A concert to make the deaf hear,
A show to make the blind see.
Yes, that’s just what this world needs
to drive out false sunshine and bring in true light:
One furious cyclone of defiance–
One beautiful storm!

Image by Sciwolf

Related Reading:

The Incarnation of Hope

Wraith Revolution by Believer

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  • mei0730 on Oct 26, 2008

    hey! wow, this is deep.
    I really like what you write, byt he way.
    can\’t wait till december!

    -Mei (from Forever)

  • Patrick Bernauw on Jan 2, 2009

    Wow, this one has the Power!… Great concept (great picture too)… and the imagery is very vivid. I especially liked “a wonderful symphony of broken silence” (and variations as “the concert to make the deaf hear”).

  • Liane Schmidt on Jan 17, 2009

    This felt like a powerful rushing storm, nice work!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • believer on Jan 21, 2009

    ahaaaa…..i do see…yours was first, thus i came around later :) well written!

  • macon on Mar 22, 2009

    well written.. and so does the picture match the poem!

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