Hey Jasin! Great to see you back! I think there are more words in your tag line than in the poem, but short and sweet – well, bittersweet really. Very emotional.

nice to see Jasin and you haven’t lost your touch, a beautiful poem for a start.

Very nicely written

Great poem. We fail so many times to be thankful for what we have, and to praise the one who provided it all. Well said and well done my friend.

it’s good to be grateful and content!

Awesome one!

A lovely poem!

Good poem

Time unravels like twine — great imagery! Jasin, good to see you here! Your writing is as thought provoking and crisp as ever!

Nice idea Jasin.

Good to have you back,,,Awesome picture,great poem.

That was lovely poem..I LOV it…keep it up..Thx for sharing
Kapan kembalinya? Bapak belayar ya?

Great poem, Jasin. Welcome back.

Lovely poem, Jasin.

Hey there, Jasin. Long time no see!
I like the picture here, and your free verse here is very introspective and makes us think a little more deeply about our time and meaning. Very good job, done in a few lines.
That last ‘waiting’, if I may make a suggestion: put it on the next line and tab it a few times. See if the effect is the same for you or if it helps at all. With “lives”, I think you meant “life’s”. Ciao for now and have a good day.

very lovely

It’s hard to be happy when something is missing. There is a emptiness , a longing feeling there. I think you did a good job here, I enjoyed the read.

Lovely piece, Jasin.

Wow, that has so much depth and meaning. Great job.

Calm relaxing yet beautiful.

Hi Jasin, good to have you back, great poem and I think it’s safe to say we are all waiting for our ship to come in. The trick is to make the most of our time while we wait and do the work at hand. Can’t go wrong there.

This is absolutely lovely! Brilliant work.

like it

WOW:Dude I liked it.good write,keep it up

Well written, sweet

I have awaken for the second time today.
Beautiful

Very beautiful picture. Did you take it? Life can be full of waiting.

very powerful!!!

Time unwinds like twine…great image and word choice.

-Fresh Writing

Very beautifully done, Jasin. It has a very spiritual feel to it. Love the piece.

I returned to read some of your fine work and found you gone. CRY

Thoughtful and reflective, Jasin. There is a lot you have ALREADY found. Brian

Nice to read a thankful writing.

Nice picture also.

Conveys the yearning of the spiritual search very well.

I really like this poem and the picture is purfect with it