Comments on: One Day

By: ragdoll

ragdoll — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 04:18:20 +0000

I really like this poem and the picture is purfect with it

WriteEditSeek — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 02:15:43 +0000

Conveys the yearning of the spiritual search very well.

Kay Bee — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 07:52:11 +0000

Nice to read a thankful writing.

Nice picture also.

Brian Daniel Stankich — Sat, 06 Jun 2009 01:53:37 +0000

Thoughtful and reflective, Jasin. There is a lot you have ALREADY found. Brian

goodselfme — Mon, 25 May 2009 23:52:17 +0000

I returned to read some of your fine work and found you gone. CRY

Debra Mann — Tue, 12 May 2009 02:54:25 +0000

Very beautifully done, Jasin. It has a very spiritual feel to it. Love the piece.

Fresh Writing — Sat, 09 May 2009 19:37:21 +0000

Time unwinds like twine…great image and word choice.

-Fresh Writing

Teyah — Fri, 08 May 2009 09:04:58 +0000

very powerful!!!

Parish Loveless — Mon, 27 Apr 2009 12:45:16 +0000

Very beautiful picture. Did you take it? Life can be full of waiting.

your mama — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 15:30:06 +0000

I have awaken for the second time today.
Beautiful