One Day

MrZen on May 5, 2008

Tags: ceased, cold, crumbled, dead, death, died, dying, friendship, gone, Icy, optimism, Pond, postive, stopped, sun, Sunlight, Sunshine

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Friendship is like sunlight.

One day,

When the world has gone away,

When all the winter trees

Have died and crumbled into the ground,

We will still be here,

Just you and me,

Like sparkles in the snow,

Like sunlight

Reflected on icy ponds.

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Comments (9)

Rana Sinha on May 5, 2008
Beautiful!
deepbluesea on May 5, 2008
This is wonderful!
Unofre Pili on May 5, 2008
Reminiscent of a Shakespeare sonnet.
tracy sardelli on May 6, 2008
beautiful poem.
leah on May 6, 2008
Generic “bleh” poetry. Don’t give up your day job! xxx
nice on May 6, 2008
ignore leah, it sounds great
Cynthia on May 6, 2008
love it ignore leah, with each poem you are learning what is good and what is not. If people are honest with you. So you can choose to ignore her or try to understand her position.
MeghnaK on May 6, 2008
Some wonderful thoughts on real friendship. Beautiful poem!
Mirsha on May 8, 2008
very good!!! lol i think im like 1 of the 2 guys that have commented on here =) i really like it especially emphasizing on the “reflected on icy ponds” really got to me =) i love this one =)

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