This is the first time I am submitting my poem in Triond…Hope you guys will like the poem and the message that it conveys..

On my deathbed, today I lie

To rewind my thoughts of life,I try

When I was a child,it was my earnest desire

To go skating,but it went on fire

An anxious lady was my granny old

“You’ll bruise your knee”,to me she told

Longingly I looked at my friends’ skate

And brooded over my pathetic fate

But my grandmom was merry and gay

‘Cos all her rules, I obey.

In my youth,I had a gripping wish

I wanted to go to the deepest sea to fish

My mother who was afraid of the water blue

Said I would catch a fatal flu

I had to forget my fancies and whims

Albeit I dreamt of shuddering,silver fins

But my mother was merry and gay

‘Cos all her rules, I obey.

When I grew up,I wanted to become an actor

But in the fields,I was forced to drive the tractor

My father,strict and stout,named Sam

Was trying hard to improve his farm

So I drove the tractor and tilled the soil

For my dreams,I did not toil

But my father was merry and gay

‘Cos all his rules,I obey.

On my deathbed,today I lie

To rewind my thoughts of life,I try

Never did I do what I had liked

But to others,I always obliged

No skating,no acting,no fishing,nothing

Of my wish,I could have done something

Next time I swore,I will skate and fish

No matter what I will fulfill all my wish

But it is then that I realise with pain

There is no life to live again!

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Comments (8)
  • Analyst on Dec 1, 2010

    Very well done!

  • Larry Fish on Dec 1, 2010

    Very well written.

  • PSingh1990 on Dec 1, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • lapasan on Dec 1, 2010

    You have written a good poem on your first effort. It has a very nice message. Congratulations!

  • LCM Linda on Dec 1, 2010

    You did a great job for your 1st try. Well expressed with sad, but true meaning. Thanks for sharing.

  • dino renaldo on Dec 2, 2010

    nice share.thanks

  • papaleng on Dec 2, 2010

    Beautiful! Keep your poems coming.

  • janesteban on Jan 27, 2011

    A very beautiful poem… thanks for sharing it with us!

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