Stories from the old homestead.


 

  One mile from where the pavement ends
Stands the old homestead where my tale begins.
Lots of stories from that old dirt road that can be told,
Like the place where I learned that I could fly.
A big oak tree where us kids would play,
I remember now with a soulful sigh.
Almost each and every night, around that tree I would zoom and whirl,
No need for wings, but thru the air I could dip and glide,
Flying around my care free world.
The others used to giggle and laugh at me,
But Mom said ‘Ignore them, son, they’re not really that unkind ,
They don’t understand, and they can’t see,
What goes on in your young and wishful mind’.
Around that tree I must have flown a million miles or more,
Only to wake in the morning safely in my bed again,
Listening to my brothers snore.

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Comments (10)
  • Sandra A Flowers on Jun 16, 2009

    awesome!!! I love the way you bring this poem home to a great end, great job

  • JoseI on Jun 16, 2009

    Beautiful.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 16, 2009

    That conjures up wonderful memories of a life gone by. Good work.

    Christine

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 16, 2009

    Wonderful memories that you’ve captured so well Phill, lovely poem.

  • Timothy P Stavert on Jun 16, 2009

    I remember those days well Phil, I just wish I could fly like you
    Unfortunately, I let go of the swing

    Nice one

    Tim

  • Jesse Robbins on Jun 16, 2009

    Great poem! Glad to see you writing. Keep writing I look forward to seeing your literature more. And from the comment so do the others!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 16, 2009

    I love your down home poetry. it sounds like my own childhood and my childrens. I always look forward to reading more of your writing.

  • OhSugar on Jun 17, 2009

    Excellent poem with wonderful memories. I love your writing style.

  • Jeffrey B. Merrow on Jun 18, 2009

    Phil.

    I have read a wonderful poem here. This is fantasic. I have been away to get my life in order as alcohol hade taken its toll on my life style. I am happy to say I am in recovery and that with great reads like this here I will enjoy my one day at a time journey. Missed you friend and the poem was fantastic.

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 11, 2009

    This one made me smile too just as the last one did. Good writing.

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