I’m very happy watching my childrens playing with the birds.

     One Sunny Day

 

It was summer time,

We walked at the park one sunny day,

My children saw many birds,

Singing and playing under the sun.

 

They runs fast,

Attempt to catch the birds,

But birds are wise,

They fly high…

 

Oh, what a beautiful day,

To play with the birds,

Shouting, smiling and running,

Laying on the ground, too.

 

I am happy and satisfied,

For the life what I have,

Seeing my children healthy and alive,

I slept with peace of mind.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • PSingh1990 on Oct 24, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Larry Fish on Oct 24, 2010

    A nice day and children playing, It just doesn’t get any better.

  • webseowriters on Oct 24, 2010

    Thanks for sharing

  • LadyElena on Oct 24, 2010

    Beautiful and Refreshing – like a little taste of paradise.
    (Many people don’t have this)

    You are Blessed. :)

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 24, 2010

    Very beautiful*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • CA Johnson on Oct 24, 2010

    I really enjoyed your poem. You described a perfect way for your children to spend the day.

  • dino renaldo on Oct 24, 2010

    wow i like it

  • lapasan on Oct 24, 2010

    Nice post.

  • panjettan5 on Oct 25, 2010

    lovely written…beautiful pics…

  • V rank on Oct 25, 2010

    very simply yet very strong… good job!

  • Saurav Banerjee on Oct 25, 2010

    Great share. You have taken me to a dream world. Thanks a lot.

  • Melinda J on Oct 25, 2010

    Beautifully written. Thanks for sharing. :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 25, 2010

    wow what a lovely poem and snaps

    London is equally beautiful

    as is Canada

    the Queen rules both

  • Philyra Clio on Oct 25, 2010

    Thanx to all!

  • Ubel Ein on Oct 25, 2010

    Great poem and beautiful pictures!

  • lovestar on Oct 26, 2010

    wonderful poem .great share

  • R.Laws on Oct 26, 2010

    A nice poem with beautiful pictures! :-)

  • gaby7 on Oct 28, 2010

    How serene! I love those birds!

  • Luna Morena on Oct 28, 2010

    Wonderful poem sounds like peace.

  • maria linda on Oct 30, 2010

    a true story…………… peace of mind.

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