Great piece! Thanks for the share!

Good Stuff

Interesting

Best Regards

Great post Jane Jane!

Very nice poem.

made me giggle there at the end. LOL That’s why I came to Triond too! To prove that I wasn’t just playing on the net!

There are many sites out there. I’ve slowed way down on my visits to other sites since starting on Triond. I find I don’t have the time if I’m busy writing.

Good write!

Too many sites can take you away from your writing. I only do Twitter so that my Triond work will be ‘out there’. And I like to follow some celebrities and contests. But I usually only check once a day. Great poem.

Keep fooling around and you’ll end up in trouble.

adorable c:
i have an account for all sites as well:D

Interesting,

I believe that creative writing is never a waste of time. I enjoy reading items I wrote years ago. I have spent most of my life taking care of my responsibilities and I regret some of that.

Thanks for sharing

lets hope your mum aproves, we do.

Well it’s certainly an intersting piece! It describes the curiousity of youth today, and more importantly it uses your brain to do so! So many kids simply surf and never find land! You’ve found it and actually stand on it and tell the world what you see! I like that! Keep it up!

Nicely written piece

I liked this poem of yours!

Interesting. I don’t really surf, but that didn’t take any enjoyment out of this poem. Keep it up!

Nice poem, very creative. That\’s why i joined triond too. My dad thought i was just wasting his money on internet bills. =)

I enjoyed reading about your journey. Some sites we just learn by trial and error.

Great poem Jane! I just Triond too so that I can earn some extra money online.

Beautiful poem

I enjoyed reading your online journey very much, thanks for sharing!

nice one. i like it. add me in FB and be my neighbor in Farmville. LOL.

Yup its free alright lol!!!!!!!!!! Nice work

i enjoyed reading this

Cool poem. You can be sure that it resonates with many of us.

good poem!

what can I say that hasn’t been said, Yet I will add I agree with tim windisch

Even Iwould have scolded you.

nice one

Great poem! Very interesting.

Thanks for sharing!

I liked the added humor in this!Great work!

Nice share. Informative too!! Thanks

Thanks for this. The Triond Gang are really something aren’t they : ))

Nicely done…good tribute to Triond.

Yeah, its free and whats more great about Triond is that you can find good friends here Nice post!

That was fabulous and I am with you on all of it x

NIce one Jane, I am enjoying my stay here in Triond.

very nice

Wacky. “It’s like complete selection in food carts.” That line could use a little work I think, but otherwise everything was nice. I was going to complain about putting “FB” instead of “Facebook” but then I noticed it was necessary for the rhyme so I got over it.

cute piece.

an awesome poem jane! i really like it thank you for showing it.

Nice one to share

nice one! add me! it is on my profile…:)

It doesn’t matter what topic you write on, when you write it’s always fun.