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Only Limited to a Dream

rafihan on Oct 22, 2010
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Liver necrosis has not healed…

I was just lost in thought even though the rain was over
liver necrosis increasingly petrified
longing which should be treated but it’s still shackles me
stabbing and puncture
because we encounter is only limited to a dream

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  • Eric Damato on Oct 22, 2010

    Wow..this poem really really moved me. InshaAllah Akhi please InshaAllah tell me that nothing is troubling you. This poem embodied so much sadness in it, a man faced with an addiction to alcohol thinking about giving up on life is what I felt. I must say I am impressed Akhi, MashaAllah!

  • pschenck on Oct 22, 2010

    Written with strong emotion.

  • Kaye TM on Oct 22, 2010

    i liked it!

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