Open and Undisturbed Countryside

Darla Cooke on Mar 15, 2010

A poem.

I want to take a magical journey,

go to a place that is far away.

I will find my own secret spot,

a location not near this area.

There will be an untouched valley,

with beautiful lush green meadows.

A river will flow clear and smooth,

beneath an old wooden bridge.

In the field there will be pretty flowers,

the hills covered in plants and trees.

The distant mountains will lead me to,

an open and undisturbed countryside.

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Comments (9)

diamondpoet on Mar 15, 2010
‘With the way you decribed it with your writing I can actually see it.
Goodselfme on Mar 15, 2010
This is great imagery, nice flow, the right length, good title and flows so well. Thank you for total enjoyment.
Christine Ramsay on Mar 15, 2010
You provide hreat imagery throughout this piece. Lovely work.

Christine
giftarist on Mar 15, 2010
You’ve painted a great imagery. Very nice work!
petercurtis97 on Mar 15, 2010
Lovely words and portrayal of a scene far away.
clay hurtubise on Mar 15, 2010
Nice job.
Thanks,
clay
Precious Illusions on Mar 16, 2010
The unadulterated beauty of nature…just beautiful..:)
cardy on Mar 16, 2010
Love the way you have written this great flow enjoyed the read very much. When do we leave!
Marie Antoinette on Mar 16, 2010
I can see the place, and I want to be there.

Hi there!