Questions that lingers in her mind.

What about laughter

What about joy

Where is the fun you gave me

that intoxicated me boy?

Why heartaches

Angry pain

Where is the love you gave me

that ignited my brain?

What about promises

What about trust

Open your blinded eyes

Can’t you see what’s happening to us?

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Comments (7)
  • ceegirl on Aug 30, 2011

    lovely poetry

  • Dehan Nathaniel on Aug 30, 2011

    Thanks Ceegirl

  • iluvpoetry on Sep 2, 2011

    Great one! :D

  • Rosettaartist1 on Sep 20, 2011

    nicely worded

  • caribbean369 on Oct 8, 2011

    This poem kinda sounds like a song!! VERY cool!! Have you ever thought about song-writing? Alot of songs really, they rhythm. :)

  • Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 9, 2011

    Never thought about song writing….maybe.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 9, 2011

    Good rhythm in the lines.

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