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mysticdave on Jan 18, 2009

Tags: America, Dreams, freedom, joys, people, romance, shamanism, torment, unrest, war

To hear the song of America, her pulse, her beat,
all the years, all the lives, scream a maddening chant.

To hear the song of America, her pulse,
her beat, all the years, all the lives,
scream a maddening chant.
It’s all about opinions you see, who is
right, who is wrong, the war rages on.
Wise old men, stories of dreams,
loves, wars past, all spin a romantic yarn.
Angry young men burn with fire,
quenched in rage.
Opinions cloistered in shared flame.
We all have opinions, but most are
based on fear.
For the ones who see, opinions on
freedom of life and love, seem a
better way to be.
All hail, Mother of us all!
Alive! i scream with a shaman’s chant.
Alive! i scream with a voice of
torment and joy.

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C Jordan on Jan 18, 2009
Interesting poem
tamdesigns on Jan 18, 2009
Nice
S M Blomker on Jan 18, 2009
i like this poem.
Kelin Hurt on Jan 18, 2009
cool read coming from you
Morgana on Jan 22, 2009
One can only hope that our different views wont be reason for wars in the future.
Debra. on Jan 24, 2009
People will always have different views on many subjects but the importance is to respect one another and remember that we are suppose to be a civilized society. Although, so many quick to jump to barbaric conclusions, such as war,we can still find a certain civility among all many opinions. There is hope.

A very thought provoking piece. Well done and God bless, Dave!
Lauren Axelrod on Jan 26, 2009
Powerful, edgy, I love it!
nesita on Jan 29, 2009
well written!
Tate Morgan on Feb 19, 2009
I am the most opinionated of all i know So i like this idea
hollynoel001 on Jan 5, 2010
very nice poem thanks!!!
Neva Flores on Jan 5, 2010
Wonderful, exciting read.
Mr Ghaz on Jan 11, 2010
Lovely! ..very attractive, creative and innovative piece…nice words too. thanks for sharing great work. well done my friend. cheers

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