The shade of orange makes me feel so warm…

I know if I touch it
I will be scorned.

So I sit and watch the movie it makes
Reds
Blues
And a moment of rage.

Reaching up with a tiny twist
Then Rolling out a in the shape of a fist.

The wind gusts down from above
But all it does is give it a shove.

Peaceful now
It’s nearly asleep
I think its looking rather sheep.

Throw on the dry blocks of ready wood
My Nannies fireplace was always good.

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Comments (6)
  • FRed on Oct 26, 2008

    Your poems always bring a smile to my face dave.

    awesome!!!

  • goodselfme on Oct 26, 2008

    I knew this would be another good one. Thank you for the great imagery.

  • Ruby Hawk on Oct 26, 2008

    That poem is so cute. Take care, Ruby

  • James DeVere on Oct 28, 2008

    Succinct and fun for complex thinking…wow. Reminds me of the stuff John Lennon wrote, very cute. Thanks James

  • mysticdave on Apr 19, 2009

    cool:)

  • Sheri Fresonke Harper on Apr 19, 2009

    Very different :) Sheri

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