We Me and Mum enjoyed walking..

As I walk along the path,
I always walked with You,
Where the spiders webs would glisten bright,
Within every morning dew.

The dawn chorus would sing through the trees,
From the pretty birds sitting everywhere,
Our favorite place, the bluebell wood,
Their fragance still sweet in the air.

I stop to gather snowrops,
I can’t help but shed a tear,
As I remember You once saying,
“These flowers are so precious My dear”.

So as I walk I think of You,
I will always keep coming here,
I feel You beside Me, in our bluebell wood,
And there are so many of them this year…

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  • Petalm on Jan 23, 2011

    Great work.

  • s j tubrazy on Jan 23, 2011

    even i enjoyed it.

  • CHIPMUNK on Jan 23, 2011

    great share

  • pattiann on Jan 23, 2011

    I enjoyed your poem. It had a rhythm, it was beautiful.

  • gaby7 on Jan 23, 2011

    I love this!

  • gaby7 on Jan 23, 2011

    Nice work of poetry!

  • s j tubrazy on Jan 23, 2011

    Nice piece of share

  • Snooky on Jan 24, 2011

    lovely and full of feeling

  • jimbob1 on Jan 27, 2011

    Judi…This is such a beautiful poem and I close my tear-filled eyes and visualize the two of you walking together and stopping to pick a blossom or two…such great imagery…I votd that I like this one…thanks and take care

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