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Our Connection is Still Unbroken

Darla Cooke on Nov 5, 2009
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A love poem.

Image by Elmo Alves via Flickr

 

Our connection is still unbroken,

we have been given a second chance.

Although our love is growing stronger,

we should proceed with caution.

You tempt me like no other can,

with your outstanding techniques.

We will spend intimate time alone,

fulfilling all of our wildest desires.

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  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 5, 2009

    What a lovely poem…Thanks for this nice one

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 5, 2009

    Captures the sentiment very well. Thank You.

  • K.Reshma on Nov 5, 2009

    Very nice poem

  • Emma Green on Nov 5, 2009

    Great picture, nice, romantic poem.

  • ashan1614 on Nov 5, 2009

    Second chances are rare….tread lightly.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 5, 2009

    Swee and romantice poem as usual.

  • ken bultman on Nov 5, 2009

    Doomed to failure.

  • Gudu on Nov 5, 2009

    like it..good

  • Hansika on Nov 5, 2009

    cool picture…nice one…..

  • johnnydod on Nov 5, 2009

    Ohh Darla you mad fool you

  • neet on Nov 5, 2009

    Romantic.

  • alc on Nov 5, 2009

    Thanks for another terrific share!

  • Themax on Nov 5, 2009

    yes our connection is unbroken!!
    Lovely poem :)

  • Goodselfme on Nov 5, 2009

    Very good title with great words that follow. Tx

  • ReggieLutz on Nov 5, 2009

    nice

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 5, 2009

    Fab poem! You should go slowly for second chances.This was nicely expressed!!

  • Starpisces on Nov 6, 2009

    Good to give yourself another chance too… well done.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 6, 2009

    full of affections.

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 6, 2009

    Very nice.. Really passionate,.. second chances are rare. :)

  • lillyrose on Nov 6, 2009

    Very well written! but the photo reminds me of an advert for hay fever! must be the floating pollen x

  • fragile18 on Nov 6, 2009

    well said. Great lines. :) like it.

  • deep blue on Nov 7, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • Aiyanna on Nov 8, 2009

    Lovely poem!!!

  • CutestPrincess on Nov 21, 2009

    lovely poem and photo…

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