God.

God is the creator of heaven and earth

God makes us brave when we are afraid

God makes us strong when we are weak

But most of all he teaches us to hold on

To him when things keep on falling.

GOD BLESS!

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  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 10, 2009

    dis is absolutely so true…well written.

  • Themax on Nov 10, 2009

    God bless you too Teves!!
    Lovely poem !!!

  • drelayaraja on Nov 10, 2009

    Well god is everywhere. Good effort. Well written poem.

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 10, 2009

    Yes, God is everything.

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 10, 2009

    How right you are. Beautiful work.

    Christine

  • Petalm on Nov 10, 2009

    Nice one.

  • Hansika on Nov 10, 2009

    excellant poem…thanks

  • wonder on Nov 10, 2009

    Heartfelt and touching.

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 10, 2009

    Very nice!

  • mathurans on Nov 10, 2009

    God Bless everybody, everything, Ever… Good.

  • LovelyWolf on Nov 10, 2009

    Always keep the faith is what I keep in mind. Especially in times like this when so many people are suffering. Not just from the economy, but from illness, violence, substance abuse, and consequences of war and more. I shall pray for all of them and you for your writing that gives us all hope! :D

  • Noodleman on Nov 10, 2009

    Nice one =) Very well written!

  • T. S. GARP on Nov 10, 2009

    So true!

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 10, 2009

    Wonderful poem Teves! And God bless you!

  • Sunitha Stalin on Nov 10, 2009

    god bless u n all

  • T.Rex McGoogle on Nov 11, 2009

    Wise advice for we who stumble.

  • Jane Benitez on Nov 11, 2009

    Beautiful words and God Bless You!

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