It Seems if The Minutes of Our Lives Are in a Race.
The Days Go Faster and Faster.

Running through the days.

Moments gone in the blink of an eye.

Disappear like vapor in a summer haze.

There was a thrill and a sigh,

At the touch of your hand.

How I want these moments to stay.

A bouguet of roses that little gold band.

Who will remember our happy chase?

This is our own season of may.

Time will paint lines on this happy face.

Does our love continue in forever land?

Or will time remove every trace?

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  • Edyta N. Tehrani on Jul 30, 2012

    Lovely poem. Our life here is just a moment in eternity, only true love lasts forever.

  • Wrath Warbone on Jul 30, 2012

    I like this one. Bitter Sweet. Unfortunately it is very true.

  • Lisa Marie Mottert on Jul 30, 2012

    Very good! Doctor Zhivago, one my favorite movies

  • Sustainable Living on Jul 30, 2012

    Very touching.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Jul 30, 2012

    Very nice

  • qncai on Jul 30, 2012

    Like, thank for share

  • Kristie Claar on Jul 30, 2012

    great work

  • stephenls on Jul 30, 2012

    Very beautiful. Something to really think about.

  • smokychristine on Jul 30, 2012

    Beautiful, so very touching.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jul 30, 2012

    Life is fleeting…

  • sabanawaz on Jul 31, 2012

    beautiful and superb poem

  • evcalangian on Jul 31, 2012

    Beautiful indeed. Thank you.

  • gaby7 on Aug 2, 2012

    Its should last well into eternity…a nice piece as always!

  • Tiki33 on Aug 2, 2012

    This is so lovely. Keep up the good work.

  • Eiddwen on Aug 4, 2012

    So very beautiful as always lauralu;take care and enjoy your weekend.
    Eddy.

  • jennyreeve on Aug 4, 2012

    Lovely and so beautifully written.

  • Moses Ingram on Aug 4, 2012

    So true.

  • sheilanewton on Aug 4, 2012

    I hope there is a forever land – but oh I so doubt it. I think once we go – we’re just GONE.

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