Out Of Mere Habit.

What does a woman usually do
After drudging in the kitchen
So that ordinary things would sleep, dutifully,
Within the cares’ dark ring of the day?
First she wipes her forehead with her right hand,
She sits down on a stool near the table,
She makes smooth
The laced table cloth
With her left hand,
Then she embraces her temples,
Slipping for a while
In an imaginary slumber,
A long train of portraits – the people she loves
Roaming her.
A bit later she carefully allows
The dusk
To overrun the room, a kind of some bitter foam.
Over and over. Every evening.
She turns the lights off
And secludes, not to give rise
To a riot of things.
She keeps silent every moment…
The woman starts resembling so much
The ordinary things surrounding her,
That, if you approached her,
You could mistake her
For a tea spoon,
For a coffee cup or
For a porcelain angel.

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Comments (15)
  • Saurav Banerjee on Sep 16, 2011

    You have visualized it perfectly.

  • Rosettaartist1 on Sep 16, 2011

    good work again

  • jaidadiz on Sep 16, 2011

    beautiful…saw myself in every line

  • Atanacio on Sep 16, 2011

    although you enjoy clciking that flag button you write very well I enjoy your work :) FRank

  • zulfikar on Sep 16, 2011

    nice idea, well framed

  • erwinkennythomas on Sep 16, 2011

    hope there’s more to a woman! great post!

  • lovinglyoursjuny on Sep 16, 2011

    Thanks for sharing ..I really like this one :)

  • neopisiva on Sep 16, 2011

    Oh, this is unexpected and sad…full of irony.
    Great work!

  • FX777222999 on Sep 16, 2011

    A woman of life..

  • wonder on Sep 17, 2011

    Wonderful and the teaspoon sounds amusing.Then from tablespoon they will graduate to mammoths.

  • toomanysounds on Sep 17, 2011

    Nice ethereal and surreal atmosphere developed from the mundane

  • Sebastian Onciu on Sep 21, 2011

    Wonderful imagery!

  • tenraj on Sep 26, 2011

    nice sharing

  • yellow rose on Oct 23, 2011

    thanks for comments…

  • realityspeaks on Nov 9, 2011

    Beautifully written

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