Out of Reality

Sheila M on Feb 22, 2010

Tags: constricted, dark, depression, faith, false, reality, subdued

Just a few words to you.

If wishes were,
I’d wish I’d never seen your face.
To tell my heart
a friend I could never replace.
Silence bowed
the words that carved in grace,
delicate
soured with time and place.

Unfortunate circumstance
your lips forever told its lie.
Put in a place
where your only choice , abide.
Conviction to a purpose
binds constricting, never tried.
If wishes were,
I’d give up on my pride.

If wishes were,
you would forever be faith ensued.
Words held true
and never misconstrued.
The light to darkness overcome.
Corners’ webs with you elude.
If only time caught reality
than darkest soul could be subdued.

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drelayaraja on Feb 22, 2010
Nice one
willyonline on Feb 23, 2010
Good sharing. Its nice way to communicate & increase good writing also gets best opportunity online through comments.
ken bultman on Feb 23, 2010
As usual lately I end up with a feeling of melancholy after reading your poetry. Don’t give up on your pride, however. Another well-written, profound piece.
ken bultman on Feb 23, 2010
Once again I find your poetry leaves me with a feeling of melancholy. Don’t give up on your pride, however. Another well-written profound piece from a gifted writer.
Kate Smedley on Feb 25, 2010
So haunting, I love the last line in particular, ‘than darkest soul could be subdued’.
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 29, 2010
Aces young lady. Aces.
mitchey179 on May 2, 2010
Nice work with this one.
Michael Eboh on Jun 1, 2010
Excellent read.

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