Are you what people are accusing you of being?

 

There is an outrageous rumor going around.

One about you being an inhuman monster.

People say you feed on human blood,

but I’m hoping that is only gossip.

Still you have the weird habit,

of prowling in old graveyards at night.

Trouble seems to follow you,

for you have the skill of finding it.

I also find it very strange,

how you vanish at early dawn.

Are you really a vampire,

like all my friends are saying?

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Comments (15)
  • Alistair Briggs on Jul 17, 2009

    I totally get this, there is a bit of that in everyone. :)
    great work.

  • Nikita K on Jul 17, 2009

    Nice twist at the end.

  • Deep Blue on Jul 17, 2009

    The rumor might be true.

  • Ramalingam on Jul 17, 2009

    Was it a mere a dream, since it vanishes at the early dawn?
    Nice poem, but there is a little bit of an element of horror.Thank you.

  • ken bultman on Jul 17, 2009

    Another great vampire story.

  • lh on Jul 17, 2009

    u love monstrous stories

    i love monstrocity

  • goodselfme on Jul 17, 2009

    interesting and well composed with horror dotted here too.

  • mdartist on Jul 17, 2009

    Hmmm! Scary!

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 17, 2009

    Dark,dark and frightening.

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 17, 2009

    Very creative!I loved it,the whole meaning.Excellent work as always Darla.

  • rajeev bhargava on Jul 17, 2009

    very chilling poem beautifully scripted. imagine in real life if someone is doing these things. day or night, it’s very scary.

  • Collette Edwards on Jul 17, 2009

    very well done, interging

  • Jamie Myles on Jul 17, 2009

    A little darkness. I like it.

  • irishpen on Jul 18, 2009

    This is cool

  • STEVE666 on Jul 20, 2009

    Mmm, scary. I’d say you’ve got a vampire there, Darla. Get that stake through his heart—quick!

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