For a Friend across the sea, also a competition entry.

I have not known you for very long,
But my heart beats inside, a rhythm so strong.
I do not know what it is you do,
But I feel so close, like I have known you my whole life through.

But I am just the lady from over the water,
With three grown up sons and a beautiful daughter,
In need of comfort, so desperately,
Wishing upon stars, you were here with me.

I could give you the love, it sounds you so need,
You would never be hungry, for my love I will feed.
Your beautiful words, I pray they are for me,
Do I read more, in what I should see.

Can I be so lucky when my life is so sad
Spend most of the time crying, the ending so bad.
Are you a friend or lover, to treat me  so kind,
If I reach out to you, what will my hands find…

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  • foxpete88 on Apr 9, 2011

    very nice,,,thanks for share.-

  • Snooky on Apr 10, 2011

    Lovely, good luck in the competition

  • jimbob1 on Apr 10, 2011

    Judi…What a beautiful tribute and pledge to some very, very lucky guy…Your words have left me heartbroken in that you are sometimes reduced to tears…and because of that I am somewhat reluctant to vote that I like this…but you know that it is impossible for me to read your amazing work and not vote that I like it… after all this is yet another winner in yet another competition.whenever you feel a sad frown coming on, stand on your head because a frown is just a smile turned upside down…thanks and take care…

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