Overwhelming

Puddinpop on Nov 26, 2011

Tags: before, feel, felt, hold, inside, intimacy, Life, love, never, overwhelming, Rest, right, tell, tight

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This love is overwhelming.

Tell me you love me

and hold me tight

I want this intimacy

for the rest of my life

never before

have things felt so right

it is overwhelming

how I feel inside

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Victoria Jenkins on Nov 26, 2011
Nice! You broke pattern with the last line; I would’ve tried a different rhyme and lengthened the poem. It’s good as-is, though.

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