Does the diet chart suit you?/

If its a red letter day for you,

You say your day is made

But then the night lugs behind and basks in the glory of the bright

And you cannot sleep.

You toss and turn in bed

Will you pop a sleeping pill instead?

Then I’ll say– no way.

Rather opt for a getaway

You tip toe out of door, you go out for a prowl

By the way, you’ll be the privileged one

To adopt the fattest owl

What if the owls opt you instead?

Do make sure of your milk and bread.

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  • abhishek40914 on Nov 16, 2009

    nice

  • Teves on Nov 16, 2009

    Good stuff…

  • ken bultman on Nov 16, 2009

    Very clever. No pills for me but no fat owls either. Wow. The eyes stare right through me. This one gave me a real hoot.

  • goindia on Nov 16, 2009

    Great pic and equally good article…

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  • svishnugopal on Nov 16, 2009

    wonderful write

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 16, 2009

    dats a fantastic composition as well i loved the picture ..itz quite abstract….

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 16, 2009

    Very nice poem and I love the picture

  • Eunice Tan on Nov 16, 2009

    Good poem

  • chitragopi on Nov 16, 2009

    Nice poem

  • Jenny Heart on Nov 16, 2009

    Nicely done!

  • Starpisces on Nov 16, 2009

    cute and nice

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 16, 2009

    great word picture

  • CA Johnson on Nov 16, 2009

    I like your picture, wonder. It’s really nice. The poem is nice too. I don’t take pills whenever I can’t go to sleep.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 16, 2009

    No pills for me, and I would love a night prowl.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 16, 2009

    Good art…And lovely poem too..

  • John Watson on Nov 17, 2009

    Ohhh…. I love this artwork!!! Nice job wonder!

  • dgraphicrookie on Dec 3, 2009

    really cool poem! Nice artwork too!

  • drelayaraja on Dec 7, 2009

    Wonderful picture and nice piece of writing friend..

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 4, 2010

    Nice one….great…

  • swatilohani on Mar 4, 2010

    awesome

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