If anyone sees Cupid around,please tell him that I need to talk to him.He seems to be everywhere but where I need him at the moment.Its of vital importance and he cant be busy on the 15th.

Has anyone in the Triond world seen Cupid around?

For a popular fellow he is very hard to locate lately.

Maybe one of you can help me find my elusive thief,

he needs to retrieve something that he left behind.

****

While its true he shot his magical arrow in my heart,

I think that he made a tragic mistake in doing so.

I fell in love and in the deepest way a woman can,

but I’m pretty sure that Cupids arrow was all wrong.

****

I fell in love with a tall, dark and handsome man,

a very talented writer that had a flair with words.

His way of talk had me swooning in an heartbeat,

the smile he had and his eyes made me secure.

****

His kiss was as intoxicating as a glass of wine,

it was like Pringles you need more then one kiss.

When he ran his big hands through my long hair,

he didn’t need to tell me to move closer to him.

****

His lovemaking skills was literally off the charts,

where he learned those skills he refuses to say.

But as he makes love to me I really don’t care,

for in his arms his past lovers simply don’t exist.

****

But his brand of magic wears off after a awhile,

you see who he is when his stories start to crack.

The fine cracks become crevices to big to repair,

before you know it you now have the grand canyon.

****

I saw through his stories and lies he has told me,

cried many a nights when he wasn’t where he said.

Cupid shot an arrow into my heart for this fellow,

but he shot more then an arrow into other woman.

****

So though I still love this man very much still,

I think its high time to have you come see me.

Remove the arrow you shot there months ago,

let me live my life and find my Mr. Right again.

****

He is free to do as he wishes from this point on,

but I am taking whats left of a broken heart back.

Slowly healing it until its a whole heart once again,

learning from the  hard lessons the ex taught me.

****

so Cupid if you are out there and not doing anything,

please come by my apartment to retrieve your arrow.

It don’t belong where you shot it many months ago,

but your next shot arrow will hit its mark very well.

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  • Payge on Feb 11, 2010

    Am aware of mistake in tittle…it is in fix and hopefully corrected soon.The small c will be redone.

  • Chris Stonecipher on Feb 11, 2010

    Hi Payge,
    I am sorry that you had to experience heart ache with this past arrow into your heart but I believe that you will be rewarded with a man that you can trust and possibily have a future together. Not all men are deceiving as the one you met. I found out the you find the right one when we are not expecting it.
    Blessings,
    Chris

  • Mushtaq on Feb 11, 2010

    Good one

  • BonesOfTheDamned on Feb 12, 2010

    I like it…I like it a lot!!!

  • Tim P Stavert on Feb 12, 2010

    Hi Roxy
    Glad to see you are still writing, I have been exploring different avenues (A book) but log on most days.
    This is a good but sad story and I am sure you will find Mr right one day.

    My tip is keep up with appearances, don’t let yourself go.
    vet the right man and Cupid will again return with his bow.
    Be patient, give it time and don’t push it to the limit
    or it will be like the last time and you might regret it.
    So all the best for finding romance the next time around
    and I keep my fingers crossed that new love will be found.

    Best Wishes

    Tim

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 12, 2010

    Payge, that’s so sad, the right person will come along who deserves you, just keep being the lovely person you are.

  • STEVE666 on Feb 12, 2010

    Nice verses, Roxy. Yeah, all that glitters is not gold. And by the way, tell Cupid, if you see that little sadist, I need a word too.

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