Getting off the emotional roller coaster of love, for a while anyway. Life lesson: nothing brings as much pleasure or as much pain as love does.

 

 

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Coming at me with sharp needles

To prick my skin again

Trying to evoke a response

Hoping it is the one you want

I am not as delicate and fragile

As I once was

You are going to have to dig deeper

To get at my heart

Both pain and pleasure

Have a higher threshold

You have brought me both

Highest highs and lowest lows

But no more

The emotional roller coaster

Comes to its final stop

The dizzying ride is over

No one should have to endure

So much pain and pleasure

 

 

©2011 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 21, 2011

    Phew, must have been really tough!

  • ashan1614 on Apr 21, 2011

    @Jimmy – you don’t know the half of it!

  • George Bek on Apr 21, 2011

    Decision made. The time has come to move on. Very determined piece, with huge strength and conviction in these words. Extremely strong piece. Thank you. George.

  • LoveDoctor on Apr 21, 2011

    This is very well-written and from the heart. After a while it makes you wonder whether true love really does exist.

  • Guy Hogan on Apr 21, 2011

    In life, pain is a given. Love is not.

  • LadyElena on Apr 21, 2011

    Aaawh… very touching.
    Life…..

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Apr 21, 2011

    Don’t give up girl and dont let the storm tear down the house that shields your heart.

    Real love does exist and its looking for you somewhere.

  • Martin Kloess on Apr 22, 2011

    Nicely Written, thank you

  • mikailahmayhem69 on Apr 22, 2011

    very well written, thanks for the share :)

  • CHIPMUNK on Apr 22, 2011

    Awesome share

  • sanaahmed on Apr 22, 2011

    great sharing nice work

  • Francois Hagnere on Apr 27, 2011

    I really enjoyed this meaningful and heart felt poem.
    Thank you Andrea.

  • ashan1614 on Apr 30, 2011

    Thanks to all for your comments!

  • neopisiva on May 1, 2011

    Lots of pleasure,lots of pain.

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