Simple poetry.

Unknown a trouble has grabbed my soul,

a trouble incapable I am to portray.

Neither the pain of love nor the tragedy of life, 

hurting my mind in a ceaseless way.

Nature seems to be speechless,

her elements pointing their fingers at me.

Birds not reply, trees not give me their shade,

the river turns off her face from me.

People reacting at me in an unusual way,

the way they never used to be.

Creatures not come at my call,

they bawl with fury when they see.

Miserable has become my life,

my friends are not around.

The pain is killing me,

life’s without any music or sound.

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Comments (11)
  • livemike on Nov 12, 2009

    Imotional,sad,gripping,heartfelt and well written…..

  • girlnextdoor on Nov 12, 2009

    This is a beautifully expressed poem with intense emotion and deep thoughts…

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 12, 2009

    Very well written..

  • Hansika on Nov 12, 2009

    very nice

  • Goodselfme on Nov 12, 2009

    There is a deep saddness to this write, however well expressed by you.

  • Teves on Nov 12, 2009

    Good poem….

  • Vikram Chhabra on Nov 12, 2009

    Very sad and emotional. I was moved by these words…

  • LOVELYHONEY on Nov 12, 2009

    nice thoughts

  • tedifa on Nov 12, 2009

    oh..u’re still in bad mood did you ? or that was just a poem ?

  • wonder on Nov 14, 2009

    Why so?Cheer up, we’re there for you.

  • Sue Nuckles on Nov 16, 2009

    Good poem

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