A poem about the new town-building project which is using an old sledding playground to build hotels and other residential buildings, called "Palas".

~Palas of decay

Palas, an architectural hack,

Truck by truck, brick by brick, car by car,

For our memories, a stab in the back

A hard lesson, how forceless we are…

As I go there, see the green mesh fence

Reminiscing about old times, winter days

For quite few years they tergiversed

But soon they realised: building pays

So now I stand powerless and watch

How long till one of us will rise?

How long till in one of us will it hatch

A power to gather, to the offices’ demise?

But time to swallow our wills and witness death

Death of memories, childhoods and dreams

Our chin we lower and our swords we sheath

Soak up the fury that’s ripping at the seams…

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Comments (5)
  • alvinwriter on Dec 9, 2010

    Very creative!

  • crisdiwata on Dec 10, 2010

    Nice rhymes! Keep it up!

  • Gracie L. Sprouse on Dec 10, 2010

    Liked this one too! More ??

  • wonder on Dec 11, 2010

    Very well composed, good expressions.

  • patrie on Dec 11, 2010

    the emotions are there… makes me feel sad… :( nice work, by the way!

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