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[Palindrome]::oasis::

Sunjhini on Sep 24, 2010
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Poetry Form – Palindrome.

Soothing and sparkling
Refreshing haven
Shimmering water
Reflected billows
Capricious sand hills
Scorching fireball
Date-Palms adorned
Oasis

****Mirror****

Oasis
Adorned Date-Palms
Fireball Scorching
Sand hills capricious
Billows reflected
Water Shimmering
Haven Refreshing
Sparkling and Soothing

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  • Raj the Tora on Sep 24, 2010

    great poetry, loved it

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Sep 24, 2010

    a beautifully worded poem. i read it several times before commenting. thanks very much for creating and sharing.

  • Noeal V on Sep 25, 2010

    Nice Share.

  • tankermone on Sep 25, 2010

    Very dramatic effect! Great!

  • PSingh1990 on Sep 25, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • dak on Sep 25, 2010

    A wonderfully written poem.

  • Percy on Sep 25, 2010

    Your poem is great. I like it.

  • Adrn0919 on Sep 25, 2010

    I really liked the way you gave the mirror reflection. Great job!

  • SuperMember on Sep 25, 2010

    nice share!

  • Angela Ohm on Sep 29, 2010

    Beautiful writing ! Thank you for sharing :)

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