Haiku about palm trees.

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Swaying in the breeze
Standing proud upon the beach
Beautiful palm trees

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  • tonywriter on Jan 26, 2011

    Nice poetry Thanks!

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jan 26, 2011

    Kinda tooooo cold to be thinking of Palm Trees here in Arkansas. At least the sun is shining today

    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • T. S. GARP on Jan 26, 2011

    Short, but sweet. :)

  • Wilbart26 on Jan 26, 2011

    Keep on writing interesting articles, never give up and always do your best! Two thumps up for you friend!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 27, 2011

    u taught me
    5 7 5
    as u have complied
    i do so whenever
    i compose haiku
    how ever rarely
    but some one told me,
    haikus are japanese
    way of appreciating nature
    i know you do see palm trees
    in the sea
    appear so naturally

    but why on that guys page
    u didn\\\’t comment
    on a four line haiku
    without sequence of 5 7 5
    as you knew.

    thanks DARLA WORDSMITH
    for reading so many of mine
    at a stretch thanks.

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