u taught me
5 7 5
as u have complied
i do so whenever
i compose haiku
how ever rarely
but some one told me,
haikus are japanese
way of appreciating nature
i know you do see palm trees
in the sea
appear so naturally
but why on that guys page
u didn\\\’t comment
on a four line haiku
without sequence of 5 7 5
as you knew.
thanks DARLA WORDSMITH
for reading so many of mine
at a stretch thanks.
Leave a Comment
Hi there!
Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!