Panic

drelayaraja on Nov 1, 2009

Tags: clouds, Cry, eye, fear, metaphor, panic, poor, poverty, Rain

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About the fear of poverty.

PANIC

Storm surge in the sea

Panic in their minds i could see,

Through the roofs they saw

The clouds moving the skies,

The first drop of rain

came from their panic-stricken eyes….

By Dr.P.Elayaraja

Continue….

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Comments (6)

Sheeja on Nov 7, 2009
Simple, but truth…
aunslaught on Nov 21, 2009
Nice, concise and precise. Great job.
dragon on Nov 22, 2009
Nice thought. I liked it very much.
Dame Barbara on Dec 4, 2009
This was very good, I really liked it. You should write more poetry than you do, you are good at it.
nithyllsmom on Dec 14, 2009
wonderful
Raj the Tora on Nov 2, 2010
Excellent work Doc. I loved the allegory of rain in tears

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