Paradise Island

Darla Cooke on Mar 11, 2009

Tags: beach, island, kiss, moonlight, ocean, paradise, poem, Poetry, sand, Sandy Shore, seashells, sun, swimming, tropical

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Spending a day at the beach.

We are spending the day at the beach,

enjoying the warm tropical sun.

We will go swimming in the ocean,

along the sandy shore we will run.

We will collect pretty colorful seashells,

laying scattered on the white sand.

We will kiss beneath the moonlight,

happy to be on the paradise island.

Image by mikebaird via Flickr

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Comments (11)

lh on Mar 11, 2009
i am going to follow ur style
a poem a day keeps a doc away and when on the beach are two u have a friend along with u

lh
Kate Smedley on Mar 11, 2009
Wish I was there, you paint the perfect picture in this poem.
Mervin on Mar 11, 2009
A perfect picture for a dark day.
rajeev bhargava on Mar 11, 2009
a beautiful poem that will make anyone feel like going to the beach. i like it.
Mr Ghaz on Mar 11, 2009
Fantastic! Another great poem from you Darla.I always enjoyed reading yr works. Well done and thanks for sharing.
Serenity Jones on Mar 11, 2009
Mmm… Mesa lovin’ the beach.
Brenda Nelson on Mar 11, 2009
That is one thing I miss dearly – the ocean, the smell of it.. I havent been to the sea for at least 10 years. Too long.
Yovita Siswati on Mar 12, 2009
I miss the beach! Beautiful poem!
Melody SJAL on Mar 12, 2009
Lovely piece. Nice shot too.
Alicia Wind on Mar 12, 2009
i always loved the measures, rhymes and length of ur poems…
CutestPrincess on Mar 12, 2009
oh, i wanna go to the beach… you’re poem is so convincing

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