Some one wants to devour fully alone.

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Partake, me but…

When you partake

A part of me

I feel I’ m the honoured one

So gladly

You consider of a part

Of thyself with glee

As you take me wholly

As a part

No more as one of the many

You had on who scored

A score

You make me feel like

A noble treasure

Because me you partake all my flesh

In equal measure

You are those who partake so many

Yet remain desired

By so much more and many

Also when you partake of me fully

Will surely then be happy

Come tear me apart

Be my very own

When we’ve done like others

You may don’t disown

I am a favourite precious one

Partake of me in earnest

Not simply for fun

Come take me to the world unknown

Where together we shall in unison moan

 Then you will realise

What’s it like to be

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  • Timothy P Stavert on Jul 25, 2009

    Another poem of unison in two lovers

    Nice one LH

    Tim

  • George W Whitehead on Jul 25, 2009

    This reads like something by Shakespeare or Marlowe. Well done, LH.

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