Was thinking techno music when I wrote this.

Party Night Dance
2 June 09

Pound Pound Pound
The girls dance all around
Beat Beat Beat
The techno beat goes down

Light sparkle in your eyes
Flashing all the colors
The beat takes us round
Everyone are shakers

Rhythm takes control
Pulsing through our souls
Musical magic all about
Lost all self-control

Bounce Bounce Bounce
Party girls go wild
Let the music be louder
Lose the inner child

And we all shall dance
Late night we prance
Taking a great chance
Life will enhance

Sweating to the beat
Taking in this heat
All such a treat
Taken by the beat

Winner gets a prize
Loser just a drive
Sitters are just dead
Dancing will survive

Get up Get up
Move Move Move
Get up Get up
Move Move Move

Pound Pound Pound
Life dances all around
Beat Beat Beat
Join in get down

Rhythm takes control
Pulses with our soul
Never never give up
Living Life is the goal

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  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 3, 2009

    This poem does take me back to my youth when I would be first up on the dance floor. Well done.

    Christine

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 3, 2009

    “we all are shakers” Interesting line…the shakers were a religious group that believed in dancing as worship.

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 3, 2009

    Great poem!

  • irishpen on Jun 5, 2009

    Cool! It has a beat to it you can hear in your head as you read.
    ~peace~

  • lisa on Jun 6, 2009

    giggles this reminds me of dance clubs i visit on SL.

  • Brandy Girl on Aug 15, 2009

    It has been too long since I been dancing.

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