Passion Fires

diamondpoet on Dec 21, 2009

Tags: making love

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Poem about making love.

Boy you make my heartache

Whenever you give me

that come-hither stare.

My body temperature rises,

one hundred degrees.

I hear fire engines and

sirens everywhere.

When our bodies converge,

there is no telling when

either one of us will resurface

and come up for oxygen or air.

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Comments (24)

alc on Dec 21, 2009
I loved the write and the pic.s! Thanks for the share!
lillyrose on Dec 21, 2009
nice to feel such passion! great poem x
ceegirl on Dec 21, 2009
Love the poem.
diamondpoet on Dec 21, 2009
Happy Holiday\’s to all my viewers, and many thanks for your comments and support.
ken bultman on Dec 21, 2009
Getting hot in here.
Videomark on Dec 21, 2009
Bring in the fire extinguisher!
jaysonv on Dec 21, 2009
nice post.. keep the fire burnin’..
Reilley on Dec 21, 2009
Will you delete this if I say I like this poem, LOVE the first graphic that you used, and hope you accept my humbly submitted correction that you meant to use \\\\\\\’hear\\\\\\\’, instead of \\\\\\\’here\\\\\\\’?

Peace.
Darla Cooke on Dec 21, 2009
Wonderful poem!
Sharif Ishnin on Dec 21, 2009
Some people just don’t resurface. Love is their oxygen,;)
Mike1229 on Dec 21, 2009
whew! alright!
Beyondbeauty3 on Dec 21, 2009
cool one
LoveDoctorLoveGoodBye on Dec 21, 2009
Awesome poetry. keep up the good work:)
albert1jemi on Dec 21, 2009
really beautiful words
ashan1614 on Dec 21, 2009
Girl, I have a bucket of ice you can sit in! (lol)
Christine Ramsay on Dec 21, 2009
Very steamy and passionate.
Christine Ramsay on Dec 21, 2009
That’s a very steamy and passionate piece.

Christine
sandie on Dec 21, 2009
great poem i enjoyed this, love your picture too, merry christmas.
Linda Lori on Dec 21, 2009
HOTTTT!!! =)
Guy Hogan on Dec 21, 2009
A love poem is perfect for the holidays.
Snooky on Dec 21, 2009
Mercy mercy mercy !
Joie Schmidt on Dec 22, 2009
Nice!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
xoxo on Dec 23, 2009
Very well written. Good poem.
CA Johnson on Jan 18, 2010
This is a really nice and passionate poem.

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