Passion( Haiku)

Angelji on Jan 11, 2012

Tags: passion, River, sleep, white sheet

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Each one differs on how we expresses ourselves. Some would be so close and some be so open, no inhibitions but so true to oneself.

Yearning in my sleep

The river of our passion

beneath this white sheet.

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Comments (12)

ImKarn23 on Jan 11, 2012
very sexy..
Martin Kloess on Jan 11, 2012
You got the form. what is sexier: the kiss or the thought of one?
pattiann on Jan 11, 2012
Beautiful
girishpuri on Jan 12, 2012
awesome
indianwriting on Jan 12, 2012
hmm..
Vivek Ratan on Jan 12, 2012
excellent…
mdrkarim7 on Jan 12, 2012
I thought someone dead is lying!
Angelji on Jan 12, 2012
@mdekarim7,,hahaha maybe you first look in the pic before reading the lines.. Thanks..
Angelji on Jan 12, 2012
thank you all guys for being here,,,
girishpuri on Jan 12, 2012
again here
vijayanths on Jan 12, 2012
Interesting piece.
aheed411 on Jan 13, 2012
Wow

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