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Passion in Rictameter

Eiddwen on Aug 2, 2012
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Passion flows beautifully and inspires each heart.

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Passion

Deep in my heart

Caresses each new dawn

Each innocent heart beats with joy

That almost magical serenity

Carries me on the wings of time

Compassion inspires

Magnificent.

Passion.

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  • girishpuri on Aug 2, 2012

    very nice

  • Stessily on Aug 2, 2012

    Eddy, Beautiful idea of compassion within passion. Yes, that’s a “magnificent passion”!
    Appreciatively, Stessily

  • stevetheblogger on Aug 2, 2012

    Yet another brilliant piece of verse.
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • Eiddwen on Aug 3, 2012

    Thank you so very much for these comment ;they are all appreciated.
    Eddy.

  • Raj the Tora on Aug 3, 2012

    Wonderful!

  • elee on Aug 3, 2012

    very good rite up thanks: elee

  • drabiakhan on Aug 3, 2012

    very nice.

  • Jswana on Aug 3, 2012

    Very pretty. Thanks! :)

  • Moses Ingram on Aug 3, 2012

    Another good one.

  • Eiddwen on Aug 4, 2012

    Thank you for all these comments and hey mean more than I can say.
    I wish you all a wonderful weekend.
    Eddy.

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