Romantic Senryu series.

chilling night occurs,
thunderstrike, heavy rainfalls,
passionate heartbeat.
~~~
soft romantic songs,
starry night, breeze overflows,
passionate heartbeat.
~~~
wet you in the rain,
dripping water through your lips,
passionate heartbeat.
~~~
a silent moment,
just the only you and me,
passionate heartbeat.

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  • Teves on Nov 24, 2009

    Nice poem…

  • Sukhdarshan on Nov 24, 2009

    “a silent moment,
    just the only you and me,
    passionate heartbeat.”

    Wonderfrul poem…..One must tap into the passionate heartbeat of the rapturous moment;

    I really enjoyed your poem it…..Thanks.

  • wonder on Nov 24, 2009

    Romantic and effectively expressed.

  • drelayaraja on Nov 24, 2009

    Chilling night occurs,
    thunderstrike, heavy rainfalls,
    passionate heartbeat.

    Great start. lovely poem.

  • Goodselfme on Nov 24, 2009

    Very nicely created and deliverd so well.TX

  • abhishek40914 on Nov 24, 2009

    very nice poem.

  • AlmaG on Nov 24, 2009

    I love it :)

  • Annashank on Nov 24, 2009

    Very Pretty!!!

  • shanthu on Nov 24, 2009

    wonderful poem…thanks for the share

  • Sue Nuckles on Nov 24, 2009

    you are really a good poet.

  • Pinaki Ghosh on Nov 24, 2009

    I like it.

  • simplyoj on Nov 27, 2009

    well said…expression is the best tool on love.

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Jan 10, 2010

    a beautiful, very expressive and romantic poem. i love it all.

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