Passionate Souls

Debra. on Jul 1, 2009

Tags: embrace, love, passion, soul

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Out of love.

Dawn slips quietly through the window.

Awaking–

I long to feel the passion of your soul.

Caringly,

And ever so lovingly

I move within the warmth of your embrace.

Aroused–

You moan and call out

In wild anticipation.

As we join,

Kissing, caressing

Together–

Under dawn’s early light,

Our souls ignite in passion.

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Comments (37)

BradONeill on Jul 1, 2009
Damn Sexy! I love it. I don’t know if the crazy formatting was intentional but it gives great curves to a sensual piece.
Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 1, 2009
Quite Beautifyl. Full of passion.
Morgana on Jul 1, 2009
Very sensual, I like it .
Poetic Enigma on Jul 1, 2009
A beautiful poem full of passion,
an amazing poem
goodselfme on Jul 1, 2009
Graceful, sensual and great word usage.Good to see you back.
rutherfranc on Jul 2, 2009
welcome back Deb! and a steamy piece for starters..
George W Whitehead on Jul 2, 2009
For shame, Debra. This is hot!
Kate Smedley on Jul 2, 2009
Wonderful and passionate piece of poetry Debbie, just beautifully done as always.
Jonie on Jul 2, 2009
Wow! Great poem, love the formatting and lovely photo.
In one word – perfect!!
stryka66 on Jul 2, 2009
I’m on fire – where’s that cold shower !!! Superb build up, Debra
Inna Tysoe on Jul 2, 2009
Well done.

Inna
Liane Schmidt on Jul 2, 2009
Lovely!! The flow – it’s gentle and beautiful*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Liane Schmidt.
BC Doan on Jul 2, 2009
So passionate and lively!
John McDonnell on Jul 2, 2009
Very hot, Debra! I love the formatting too.
nutuba on Jul 2, 2009
Wow Debra, this is great stuff!
Fegger on Jul 2, 2009
Perhaps defining how all poets desire to begin their day…..very nice, Deb.
Westbrook on Jul 2, 2009
I think the author needs something here and it’s not a shower, lol.
cole justify on Jul 2, 2009
Such a perfect blend of Sultry and Fiery and soulful. Passionate is the exact definition for your style of writing, Debra. As always I look forward to much more of your wordly creative ensembles. Great write Debra…

God Bless you and yours…
Patrick Bernauw on Jul 2, 2009
Very convincing!
Alina Beck on Jul 2, 2009
Love the single word lines – such a sense of building anticipation!
dacournean on Jul 2, 2009
Very nice Deb! Great way to start a day!!
STEVE666 on Jul 2, 2009
Hot’n’ sensual. Great write.
Mystical Whitewolf on Jul 2, 2009
Lots of passion in the words of this poem.Very sensual! Well done.
The Quail on Jul 2, 2009
Awesome poetry!
Ruby Hawk on Jul 2, 2009
mmmmmm, nice morning and so was the poem.
Juancav on Jul 2, 2009
Lovely poem,what a wonderful awakening early in the morning.
Yovita Siswati on Jul 3, 2009
sexy poem!
Christine Ramsay on Jul 3, 2009
A romantic and passionate piece. Lovely work, Debbie. It is good to see writing again.

Christine
clay hurtubise on Jul 3, 2009
Nice job!
Thanks,
Clay
MMV Abad on Jul 4, 2009
Wow! Super… Very intimate Debbie
Louis Brown on Jul 4, 2009
Very nice read and stimulating as intended. You hit the target with lots of titillating descriptiveness. Come by.
Unofre Pili on Jul 4, 2009
So intensely romantic piece.
Chris Stonecipher on Jul 7, 2009
Quite romantic my friend!
sheba on Jul 11, 2009
Very moving. Enjoyable read! Thanks alot for sharing!
Mary Patricia Bird on Jul 13, 2009
Beautiful!
S A JOHNSON on Jul 20, 2009
Wow, steamy.
Brian Daniel Stankich on Jul 31, 2009
Debra, nice expression.

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