Wrote this a sort of reminder to me. when I get down and depressed I can look back and know that I can feel like this again and that it will pass me by.

The dark old days seem to have parted

left me alone, for a good while now,

The sunshine is beaming through my 

thoughts, feeling so bright and warm.

*

The smile I smile is no longer fake, 

the laugh I  laugh is real too, 

My heart is full of joy, 

no longer heavy and destroyed, 

My shoulders set back, no longer hunched, 

my head held high looking to the sky,

instead of the dark grim pavement under my feet.

*

There’s so much to live for

so much to give, to share

and to see, in our wonderful world

 we live in. 

*

The summer’s sun is not just shinning in the sky

but in my mind, my thoughts, my whole body too.

*

The dark old days have past me by, 

there is a new world waiting for me 

waiting for me to live it! 

Krrymarie. 20.6.11

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  • ceegirl on Jun 19, 2011

    awesome poetry

  • Alyssa M. on Jun 19, 2011

    like the way you wrote this one. thanks for sharing. keep it up!

  • 1hopefulman on Jun 20, 2011

    Beautifully expressed optimistic poem. The sun is always there even if the clouds hide it. God, the source of joy, is always there even if we don’t care to look.

  • krrymarie on Jun 20, 2011

    Thank you for your comments

  • isloooboy on Jun 23, 2011

    Keeping Hope alive is the real art of our life which you showed in your writings thanks for sharing hope with us :)

  • Atanacio on Jul 20, 2011

    a very good share and I’m sorry about the passing of your grandma :( Frank

  • beingwell on Jul 20, 2011

    Nice one!

  • sambasivarao on Jul 22, 2011

    Very nice

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