Peaceful Dreams

carissimi on Aug 3, 2010

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Peaceful dreams again…..

i have found my peace

and i have found my joy

i will start writing again

my dreams i dreams again

for i find that need again

but i will not type this time

it shall be written

with paper and pen

it shall be written

and then torn to shreds

they way it should have been

from the beginning, middle, and end

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PARAM on Aug 3, 2010
Great poem……lovely lines
drelayaraja on Aug 3, 2010
Lovely poem.
wonder on Aug 3, 2010
A unique piece with an unpredictable ending.
alxymy on Aug 3, 2010
Simply Wonderfull.
Jswana on Aug 3, 2010
Quite unique. Thanks for sharing.
webseowriters on Aug 3, 2010
very nice
Raj the Tora on Aug 3, 2010
Excellent lines
J M Lennox on Aug 4, 2010
As ”wonder” commented – an unpredictable ending, but I think we all end up throwing some of our thoughts away at times. I just hope you don’t do that too much otherwise we would miss out on your great writing. We are our worst critics at times. I really liked your poem – it was as ”wonder” said also – unique!
gaby7 on Aug 4, 2010
Dreams are great things to as long as we live!
Dreamescape on Aug 5, 2010
I feel the same, writing makes me happy. I usually type on my computer, but it became difficult. I was losing my creativity. So I picked up a pen and got some paper and now I can’t stop.
Aileen Tecson on Aug 6, 2010
very impressive to dream is free anyway!
Inxxu on Aug 7, 2010
I was thinking the same, when I joined Triond…to write again and dream my deams as well

I loved this poem of yours!

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