Wouldn’t it be nice, if none of us had problems and we made our lives lived simple and to live in peace. Wouldn’t it be nice if we all had good thoughts and shared an experience in life with contentment and no harm. Life could be this simple. But it isn’t.

Problematic views

Comes from all directions

We all need to make those corrections

Comes a time we must heal

Disposing all those ills

Learning as we go

Another day we throw

Enjoy the time you have left

All good thoughts

Should be kept

Sending thoughts of positive views

Only spreading those good news

Why all the matter

When we come to chatter

Why all the feast

When life could be lived in peace

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  • Angela Ohm on Oct 24, 2010

    Lovely poem. Thank you for sharing :)

  • realltony on Oct 24, 2010

    Great Poem ! )

  • ishinimrod on Oct 24, 2010

    Well written article. keep it up!

  • Joie Schmidt on Oct 24, 2010

    Good work!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • PSingh1990 on Oct 24, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • albert1jemi on Oct 24, 2010

    great share

  • The Soul Explorer on Oct 24, 2010

    Well done. Thanks!

  • Angelonearth2001 on Oct 25, 2010

    I like it very much, i feel the peace in it…..i feel the message you want to give……great poem

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