I like that copyright part! And your poem is more alive!

Very bold topic, very well handled. You certainly went all out in this one. Great effort. Couple of particularly excellent lines, the hide & seek section being the pick of a very good bunch

Good strength in this poem Sweetievee! I love the defiance a good write. Pedophilia will continue to grow in our society until we get very serious about the punishments. I believe Life in prison or the death penalty is the only way to stop these monsters.

i say castrate them, that will stop them.

The poem was short & sweet.

This poem would have made people think for themselves, if not for the title.

I love the poem nevertheless.

One of the ads says Smack DVD Rap Battles…LOL Please don’t tell anyone why that’s funny.

The punishment for pedophila should at least match, if not exceed, the devastation left in its wake. Very powerful piece, sweetievee.

Wow.

I don’t know if I have read much of your stuff but this was amazingly good! The message is very clear and very strong, I think you should be proud of this. Extremely well written piece, you give the victims of child abuse a voice.

why don’t you look up the NAPAC and publish your poem on there.

WOW! I don’t get speechless very often, but my jaw dropped on this one! OUTSTANDING! Whew….you really need to submit this to a publication, a contest or something. It deserves incredible recognition!

Wow. This really dives deep. I hope this isn’t something that’s truly happened to you. But anyway, I like that you explored different aspects in the poem but still stuck to the main idea.
Keep Writing,
_Bria

That was both awful and amazing. I need some kittens and butterflies now, I hope you’ll have some too.

wow great peom, you made it strong oponioned with out ratting on, which hard to do, kudos to your great peom.

As always the worst in the human being seeks to be popular by choosing a topic that makes blood boil and which at the same time wraps oneself in that little self righteous cloak one likes to wear as a cheap means of getting acceptance and approval. But my mind can detect those who are the masters of life and love, and loving and fairness and Justice. Enter here at your own risk: I at this moment have only to ask a mind….but what if there could be human beings out there somewhere who had such desires, but was so moral a person that they would secretly never allow their negative passion the freedom to express itself. If every kind of human can exist…surely they too exist and are they not deserving of our respect and care having found themselves in a peculiar existence and having raised above on their own accord and without the help of others? And those who might consider this question are those who actually have minds and who do not merely use life and peculiar differences in life as a means to some end other than fairness and Justice.

Leo: I wrote this because I was raped and was expressing myself. And… to the rest of the comment – Huh?

Leo: I wrote this because I was raped and was expressing myself. And… to the rest of the comment – Huh?

Everything I write about is something I feel deeply about or have experienced.