Pendulum

Phoenix Montoya on Oct 2, 2010

Tags: dark poem, horror poem, pendulum

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A blade horror.

Image by Whiternoise

Arms and limbs grow numb,

as the air turns cold.

Lazily it falls,

sliding from above.

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Wrists struggle in ache,

nasty, evil clasps!

Your hopeless mouth shrieks,

as destiny moves down.

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Slicing back and forth,

slow torture of death.

Such fortune, the heart,

collapses in fright!

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Inspired by the great master – Edgar Allan Poe.

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Comments (19)

TwiKnight on Oct 2, 2010
Hehehe… Reminds me of Saw the movie. Nice one, mate!
Phoenix Montoya on Oct 2, 2010
Glad you like it heatblast…. BOO lol!
Allison Jae on Oct 2, 2010
Very creepy and horrifying. Poe would be proud.
Starpisces on Oct 2, 2010
wonderful poem, very nice.
drelayaraja on Oct 2, 2010
This is a good poem… Quality at its best
Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 3, 2010
Very nicely written. I haven’t read much from you of late, hope you are fine.
Joseph Scott on Oct 3, 2010
A good piece for Halloween! lol, I liked it
Kaye TM on Oct 3, 2010
getting better and better!
NIYATI BHAT on Oct 3, 2010
Really..horrifying.Good one!
krrymarie on Oct 3, 2010
great poem! scary horror love it.
babyjingles1231 on Oct 3, 2010
very scary….. I’ve been there………
zulfiqarali5 on Oct 3, 2010
Thanks for share . nice informative material !
deep blue on Oct 3, 2010
Sweet fluid lines, the call of death. Thumbs up, kabayan.
BC Doan on Oct 4, 2010
I have to admit I’m liking this dark, bone-chilling series of your poems, Phoenix! Different and fantastic…
Phoenix Montoya on Oct 4, 2010
Thank you guys. Just ‘re-discovering’ an old passion of mine. Nope, haven’t written anything like this for two years now.
Ubel Ein on Oct 7, 2010
Very Good!
reciel tanaid on Oct 13, 2010
creepy.. thanks for sharing
yes me on Oct 19, 2010
Another fine write cheers
1hopefulman on Jan 17, 2011
Scary!

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