This speaks about past memories, how they can bring us down.

Dark clouds, they will stay

When the sunshine goes away,

Pains of yesterday

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  • jennifer eiffel01 on Sep 15, 2012

    Very true. Good haiku!

  • Robin L on Sep 15, 2012

    You could have written this for me….Excellent haiku:)

  • Robin L on Sep 15, 2012

    Excellent Haiku….This could have been written for me.

  • stevetheblogger on Sep 15, 2012

    Kharla so much said in so few words
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • Kai Vicky on Sep 15, 2012

    Few words, but explains it all. Awesome.

  • Tulan on Sep 15, 2012

    It would be a joy to be able to wipe bad memories away.

  • Martin Kloess on Sep 15, 2012

    good job

  • Molly Girl 822 on Sep 20, 2012

    So true!

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