Live a precious life.

Life is a series of different experiences,

Each of which will mold us even though it is hard to realize 

People grow through experience as they learn from them

The greater our knowledge and experience, the higher we can fly

We deal with disappointing and depressing experiences each day of our lives

Those experiences will make us all that we do worthwhile

So better be prepared to tackle the bumps on the road of life

In order to grow and to learn strategies on how to achieve success in life

Our ability to achieve success depends on the strength of our wings we gained

We must learn that the setbacks and griefs will help us marching onward

For the world was built to develop a character

A character that will fade when time has come

Life is a process

Love people and they will love you back

Everyone wants a life continuous and genuine happiness

But life is not a spectacle or a feast rather it is a predicament

Life is so short

So live a precious life

That we must live a life as a model for others

A life that will touch other life.

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  • CutestPrincess on Mar 9, 2009

    you did an outstanding job of writing this… keep it up!

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Mar 9, 2009

    Another nice set of aphorisms. Good use of themed topic.

  • rutherfranc on Mar 9, 2009

    inspiring..

  • Amsky on Mar 10, 2009

    A nice voice out! Precise and effective use of words.. Keep writing

  • macon on Mar 10, 2009

    nice work. very true, life is really short…

  • an3th on Mar 10, 2009

    nice ALFONSI hehehehe paburger ka nmn..(galing) my talent ka pla ok yan 2loy mo lng yan…pede req nxt tym love letter nmn gwin mo nyhahahahah (juk) =))=)) (Peace) inferness maganda.

  • Bren Parks on Mar 10, 2009

    beautiful!!

  • Anne McNew on Mar 11, 2009

    great job

  • eirol on Mar 12, 2009

    were u the one speaking on this? hehe! kudos!

  • Krystal Ann on Mar 13, 2009

    Great job on this piece. Again, you write with such truth from your soul

  • kate smedley on Mar 15, 2009

    Beautiful message in this, well written

  • butterflysects on Mar 16, 2009

    life is precious, can’t be regained, indeed!=)

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 22, 2009

    Very smooth and vivid. Love the flow and style, thanks.

  • rajeev ibhargava on Mar 27, 2009

    a really nice poem to read and a beautiful message about the kind of life to lead.

  • starrlove9 on Apr 6, 2009

    Another touching one. Really enjoyed

  • Dhey on Nov 20, 2009

    two thums up! very inspiring ^i^

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