A poem.

Image by donjd2 via Flickr

 

In the morning I wake up,

and greet a brand new dawn.

I gaze out my bedroom window,

there’s a deer out on my lawn.

 

In the afternoon I go outside,

have a picnic in the warm sun.

Next I drive through the countryside,

across a lush green meadow I run.

 

Each evening I sit out on my porch,

enjoying the cool Autumn breeze.

I listen to the soothing music,

of birds singing high up in the trees.

 

At night I like to take a stroll,

all alone beneath the moonlight.

I gaze up at the clear dark sky,

thrilling in the amazing starlight.

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Comments (11)
  • ken bultman on Oct 11, 2009

    Great poem. You had a wonderful day. I would love to have one just like it but I wouldn’t be able to describe it so well.

  • Sourav on Oct 11, 2009

    Very well composed poem. Well done!

  • deep blue on Oct 11, 2009

    I missed the rhymes come out for so long they finally showed up. I absolutely like this one, Darla.

  • livemike on Oct 11, 2009

    A very nice surprise..Truely wonderful poem..

  • Petalm on Oct 11, 2009

    Sounds ideal.

  • Papa Sparks on Oct 11, 2009

    Really nice.

  • Goodselfme on Oct 11, 2009

    Nice imagery and presented so well to help me fully enjoy your poem.

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 12, 2009

    Lovely work. You sound like a girl after my own heart. I love all those things as well.

    Christine

  • xoxo on Oct 12, 2009

    Beautiful day indeed.

  • emmahaynes on Oct 12, 2009

    Your life sounds perfect

  • STEVE666 on Oct 12, 2009

    Nice poem, Darla. Deer on your lawn? That\’s some garden you must have.

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