Perfect Love

Katie Marie on Sep 28, 2009

Tags: Agape, dancing, jesus, joy, love, perfection, spirituality

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Joy Unspeakable.

Radiant beams break through the somber dusk

With iridescent colors washing over silent stone.

Energy of purest form bursts through viscus barrier

Erupting into waltzing swirls of joyous song.

Feet are set to dancing in graceful pirouettes

While arms fly free like silken banners in the wind.

Oh, such Perfect Love is this!

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Comments (17)

Darla Cooke on Sep 28, 2009
Lovely poem.
papaleng on Sep 28, 2009
that was a lovely one.
hfj on Sep 28, 2009
Very nice poem. Well written and expressive. Well done
fragile18 on Sep 28, 2009
nice poem
cutedrishti8 on Sep 28, 2009
wonderful work…
ken bultman on Sep 28, 2009
Very much akin to the song of Solomon.
Karen Gross on Sep 28, 2009
Beautiful imagery.
Jonie on Sep 28, 2009
Dancing and flying with you!
STEVE666 on Sep 28, 2009
Beautiful words, Katie.
Theresa Johnson on Sep 28, 2009
very beautiful piece Katie….
Casey Mack on Sep 28, 2009
A beautiful snapshot of a moment.
Shawn O on Sep 28, 2009
Wonderful words. Great poem.
Melody SJAL on Sep 28, 2009
While arms fly free like silken banners in the wind…Love your choice of words in this piece so much.
Lasich on Sep 28, 2009
I love the word choice! I can picture what’s going on, it’s beautiful!
deep blue on Sep 29, 2009
The feeling transcends all emotions. Only if it is sublimely genuine. I suppose you’re always inspired, the attitude which we all should have.
kate smedley on Sep 29, 2009
I loved ‘energy of purest form bursts through viscus barrier’ – that captures the whole poem, beautiful work my friend.
Poetic Enigma on Oct 1, 2009
Beautiful and vivid, another amazing poem (:

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