Perfect World

Darla Cooke on Dec 21, 2009

Tags: autumn, beach, Perfect World, rainbow, River

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A poem.

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If only my future were bright,

like the colors of a rainbow.

I would live in the perfect world,

where Autumn stayed year round.

I would run along a sandy beach,

picnic beside a sparkling river.

A place of infinite beauty,

phenomenal and magical.

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Comments (17)

ken bultman on Dec 21, 2009
You can do this in your dreams. Sweet dreams.
Linda Lori on Dec 21, 2009
Beautiful poem and picture!
qasimdharamsy on Dec 21, 2009
Very nice….
Christine Ramsay on Dec 21, 2009
The time will come. A nice and expressive piece.

Christine
Milton H Peebles III on Dec 21, 2009
Beaches are always fun. Ever stood on one when a storm is coming in. I did that once when I was a teen.
Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Investinmenetwork on Dec 21, 2009
nice work im touched by it well done
johnnydod on Dec 21, 2009
you paint a lovely picture
diamondpoet on Dec 21, 2009
I would love to live at that place as well, very nice piece.
Starpisces on Dec 21, 2009
nice poem, and nice picture selected, I believe your future is bright.
ladydryle on Dec 21, 2009
I’ve been dreaming of that place too….great post..thanx for sharing this one… it made us dream this as well..
alc on Dec 21, 2009
Dramatic, imaginative, perfect!!! Loved this thanks for sharing!
STEVE666 on Dec 21, 2009
Sounds nice, Darla!
LOVELYHONEY on Dec 21, 2009
your poem qualifies you as the

WORLDS GLOBAL WARMING PRESIDENT
thuanynguyen on Dec 22, 2009
awsome poem.
Aiyanna on Dec 23, 2009
That is really pretty and I must say that is a really perfect world… thank you for sharing:-)
Geomorphosis on Dec 23, 2009
seven
PhoenixRox on Dec 26, 2009
Very expressive and magical.

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