If something is so perfect, then it would not find a place in this world, as there always has to be room for improvement to ensure survival.

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Perfect! Possible?

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Everything’s partial,

Perfect things are not worthy!

Perfection is myth.

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Extinction Guaranteed!

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If they are complete,

There won’t be space to fill more,

Time abandons them!

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  • 1hopefulman on May 26, 2011

    Great haiku! While I admire your creative skill, I disagree with your philosophy.

  • Raj the Tora on May 26, 2011

    I truly appreciate your candid feedback 1HopefulMan, and yes, nature and time has proven and been proving the philosophy right. This is a mere observation, just like saying sun rises in east and sets in west :)

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on May 26, 2011

    great sharing

  • Jimmy Shilaho on May 26, 2011

    True but we still try some more.

  • Raj the Tora on May 26, 2011

    it good to keep trying, but I wanted to warn those who try to become perfectionists and kill themselves for this mirage!

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